√Seasons In The Sun - Westlife

Troy

小弟第一次把自己唱的歌传到网上，望大家多支持、多指教

goodbye to you, my trusted friend,
we've known each other since we were nine or ten;
together we've climbed hills and trees,
learned of love and a-b-c`s,
skinned our hearts and skinned our knees.

goodbye my friend, it's hard to die,
when all the birds are singing in the sky;
now that the spring is in the air,
pretty girls are every where;
think of me and i'll be there.

we had joy, we had fun,
we had seasons in the sun;
but the hills that we climb
were just seasons out of time.

goodbye, papa, please pray for me,
i was the black sheep of the family;
you tried to teach me right from wrong,
too much wine and too much song,
wonder how i got along.

goodbye, papa, it's hard to die,
when all the birds are singing in the sky;
now that the spring is in the air,
little children every where,
when you'll see them, i'll be there.

we had joy, we had fun,
we had seasons in the sun;
but the hills that we climb
were just seasons out of time.
we had joy, we had fun,
we had seasons in the sun;
but the wild and the song,
like the season has all gone

goodbye, michelle, my little one,
you gave me love and helped me find the sun;
and every time that i was down,
you would always come around
and get my feet back on the ground.

goodbye, michelle, it's hard to die,
when all the birds are singing in the sky;
now that the spring is in the air,
with the flowers every where
i wish that we could both be there.

we had joy, we had fun,
we had seasons in the sun;
but the hills that we climb
were just seasons out of time.
we had joy, we had fun,
we had seasons in the sun;
but the wild and the song,
like the season has all gone
all our lives we had fun,
we had seasons in the sun;
but the hills that we climb
were just seasons out of time.

[ 本帖最后由 djpanda 于 2007-10-8 07:40 编辑 ]

Troy

自己先顶一下

找碴：
第一段录的时候有杂音
最后一段I wish that we could both be there的there和两次but the wine and the song的wine偏低

小小地自满一下：自己认为在本站的seasons in the sun的翻唱中我的还是不错的~ 至少英语发音还是OK的吧~
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欢迎大家继续帮我找碴

djpanda

搂住的第一个作品虽然有点青涩
但是完全支持新人
演唱的基本还好
唱歌是要多用心的情感
还有后期有待加强

哦的确厉害啊。我也喜欢听这歌

kyokagong

LZ 继续努力  声音挺好的

Angelas

MS声音有点大~不过唱的满好的说...很Sun的感觉啊~

poince

声音有点大，挺温柔的呵呵~~~~~~~

aoecheng

确实稚嫩了些!加油哦!

nostars

都还挺好的哦～～～LZ加油哦～～～

Complicated

非常有感觉~~以后肯定有前途~~~

有那种气质~~