What Goes Around.../...Comes Around (cover by Frank Yu)

caochong

小试牛刀JT的歌！请各位多多指教！

Hey Girl
Is he everything you wanted in a man?
You know I gave you the world
You had me in the palm of your hand
So why your love went away
I just can't seem to understand
Thought it was me and you, baby (baby)
Me and you until the end
But I guess I was wrong

Don't wanna think about it (uh)
Don't wanna talk about it (uh)
I'm just so sick about it
I can't believe it's ending this way
Just so confused about it (uh)
Feeling the blues about it (yeah)
I just can't do without ya
Tell me is this fair

Is the way it's really going down?
Is this how we say goodbye?
Shoulda known better when you came around
That you were gonna make me cry
It's breaking my heart to watch you run around
Cause I know that you're living a lie
But that's ok, baby, cause in time you will find

What goes around, goes around, goes around, comes all the way back around
What goes around, goes around, goes around, comes all the way back around
What goes around, goes around, goes around, comes all the way back around
What goes around, goes around, goes around, comes all the way back around
Yeah

Now Girl
I remember everything that you claimed
You said that you were moving on now (on now)
Maybe I should do the same (maybe I should do the same)
The funny thing about that is
I was ready to give you my name
Thought it was me and you baby (baby)
And now, it's all just a shame
That I guess I was wrong

Don't wanna think about it (no)
Don't wanna talk about it (hm)
I'm just so sick about it
I can't believe it's ending this way
Just so confused about it (uh)
Feeling the blues about it (yeah)
I just can't do without ya
Can you tell me is this fair

Is the way it's really going down?
Is this how we say goodbye?
Shoulda known better when you came around
That you were gonna make me cry
Now it's breaking my heart to watch you run around
Cause I know that you're living a lie
But that's ok, baby, cause in time you will find

What goes around, goes around, goes around, comes all the way back around
What goes around, goes around, goes around, comes all the way back around
What goes around, goes around, goes around, comes all the way back around
What goes around, goes around, goes around, comes all the way back around
Yeah

What goes around comes around
Yeahhh
What goes around comes around
You should know that
What goes around comes around
Yeahhh
What goes around comes around
You should know that

Don't wanna think about it (no)
Don't wanna talk about it (hm)
I'm just so sick about it
I can't believe it's ending this way
Just so confused about it (uh)
Feeling the blues about it (yeah)
I just can't do without ya
Tell me is this fair

Is the way it's really going down?
Is this how we say goodbye?
Shoulda known better when you came around (shoulda known better)
That you were gonna make me cry
It's breaking my heart to watch you run around (now it's breaking my heart)
Cause I know that you're living a lie
But that's ok, baby, cause in time you will find

What goes around, goes around, goes around, comes all the way back around
(What goes around comes around, baby)
What goes around, goes around, goes around, comes all the way back around
(What goes around comes around, baby)
What goes around, goes around, goes around, comes all the way back around
What goes around, goes around, goes around, comes all the way back around
Yeah

Yup
Yup
Yup (let me paint this picture for ya, baby)
Yup

You spend your nights alone
And he never comes home
And everytime you call him, all you get is a busy tone
I heard you found out
That he's doing to you
What you did to me
Ain't that the way it goes
When you cheated, girl
My heart bleeded, girl
So it go without saying that should let the feeling hurt
Just a classic case scenario
Tale as old as time
Girl, you got what you deserved
And now you want somebody
To cure the lonely nights
You wish you had somebody
That could come and make it right
But girl, I ain't somebody
I'm out of sympathy
See...

What goes around comes back around
I thought I told ya
Hey (hey)
What goes around comes back around
I thought I told ya
Hey (hey)
What goes around comes back around
I thought I told ya
Hey (hey)
What goes around comes back around
I thought I told ya
Hey (hey)

Take it to em, J

Hey, hey, hey, hey (repeatedly till the end)

Haha
See
You shoulda listened to me, baby
Take it to em, J
Because
What goes around comes back around
Hahahaha
Ooh
Ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh
Ooh
Ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh

dongjiewen007

大爱这首歌，唱的还不错dude

manu919

有些细微的不足，我觉得啊。。。我比较。。。嗯高要求。。。就是那个。。。我不是专业的不知道怎么说，就是急转音的地方，处理的不好哦，有点不干脆的，Justin的歌需要那种连贯的感觉啊。。。发音的话，是有点不欧美，但是其他倒是不错的，你的音色很适合Justin。。。。加QQ哦~~~~

manu919

hmm~~~稀饭你的假音~~~请加我QQ512286521，我听欧美歌9年啦~~~想交流交流~~~

smileABC

哇 我超喜欢JUSTIN的这首歌
唱的好
你声音有点硬了一点 要软点 SEXY一点会好听一些

糖糖宝宝

楼主发音不错哦~~~唱得很好哈~~~~

superman20

這是非英文母語人的通病吧，會有一點口音！努力克服，多寫點評！
caochong 发表于 2009-2-12 22:48

这个其实可以克服的，并非就是我们的顽疾。
多看看原声美剧或者美国影片。再仔细听那些细节地方歌手的发音是能纠正的，呵呵

七宝

初了混响 其他都很棒

Suzy

同意 #4 & #6~~
不過咬字其實很好~
echo 真的大了點~ 是用 vocal cut 的伴奏嗎??
其實 "what goes around" 那短你也可以玩也下，呵呵~
效果應該會不錯的~ 而且那個 echo 對比可能會小一點~
不錯聽~ 加油 =)

caochong

我觉得问题是，个别地方发音咬字太直白了，可以弱一些，总之不要太强调。
其他的还好。人声好像比伴奏稍高了一点点
superman20 发表于 2009-2-10 18:59

這是非英文母語人的通病吧，會有一點口音！努力克服，多寫點評！