Innocence--请大家多提意见

tyandpushu

waking up i see that everything is ok
the first time in my life
and now it's so great
slowing down i look around
and i am so amazed
i think about the little things
that make life great
i wouldn't change a thing about it
this is the best feeling

this innocence is brilliant,
i hope that it will stay
this moment is perfect,
please don't go away,
i need you now
and i'll hold on to it,
don't you let it pass you by

i found a place so safe,
not a single tear
the first time in my life
and now it's so clear
feel calm i belong,
i'm so happy here
it's so strong
and now i let myself be sincere
i wouldn't change a thing about it
this is the best feeling

this innocence is brilliant,
i hope that it will stay
this moment is perfect,
please don't go away,
i need you now
and i'll hold on to it,
don't you let it pass you by

it's the state of bliss you think
you're dreaming
it's the happiness inside
that you're feeling
it's so beautiful
it makes you wanna cry

it's the state of bliss you think
you're dreaming
it's the happiness inside
that you're feeling
it's so beautiful
it makes you wanna cry

it's so beautiful
it makes you want to cry

this innocence is brilliant,
it makes you want to cry
this innocence is brilliance,
please don't go away
cause i need you now
and i'll hold on to it,
don't you let it pass you by

this innocence is brilliant,
i hope that it will stay
this moment is perfect,
please don't go away,
i need you now
and i'll hold on to it,
don't you let it pass you by

yuannju

唱的很不错啊。细节的地方再放开就更好了。。。

仙女一枚

楼上姐姐好像没放开。。。。不过比我好很多了。多唱一些发上来就会有进步

A·N·X

原唱那个声音穿透力啊~~~~
LZ唱的整体不错，有个别地方不是很好，嗯。。。有点小别扭。。。
如果再练练然后放开嗓子唱会要更好哦~
嘿嘿~