[自唱]原创作品《每次》Everytime,第一次英文创作,征求中文歌词

软小二

真棒，佩服的五体投地，制作的很精细，配器也不错！

hairspray

难得听道英文原创,顶下,赚点钱了

我在昆明读书,希望我楼主好好的交流下

xiongrulin

Originally posted by killingsong at 2005-6-3 20:59:
hi,m8,did u wirte the lyrics by yourself?it's very nice except that some of them confused me much.they are "In Sunday, In Monday, In Tuesday, In Wednesday
Thursday, Friday and In Saturday&qu ...

When I wrote these, I was thinking about a lyrics I heard before: "Miss you in Sunday afternoon"

xiongrulin

各位朋友,我最近可能会有一段时间上不了网了,过段时间再见!!!

sESK_image

纤手莲心

有空就来看看，等着听你的新歌。。。

killingsong

随着一声『玉皇大帝到』，从天上掉下一滴甘露正好落在你的嘴唇上！
你在恍惚中看见了2两黄金。
well,u have to use ON MONDAY...,u can turn to an american to check it out,,lyrics,yes,they sometimes don't obey grammar rules for the melody reason i think,but u have to use on before monday ect..difinitly

songcansc

值得敬佩~~`````
有机会教我这菜鸟几招吧！！！

RainbowLiu

Originally posted by xiongrulin at 2005-6-4 22:33:

When I wrote these, I was thinking about a lyrics I heard before: "Miss you in Sunday afternoon"

in Sunday afternoon毕竟是in afternoon嘛，确切时间当然用in咯~~

xiongrulin

随着一声『财神爷爷到』，从天上掉下一滴甘露正好落在你的嘴唇上！
你在恍惚中看见了2两黄金。
是啊,是我搞错了,丢人,算了,这一版就让它这样了,下次录的时候再改吧!

锋芒四射

怪不得这么多人支持！！！！听了，很棒！！！！！我也来支持！！！！