[自唱]原创作品《每次》Everytime,第一次英文创作,征求中文歌词

xiongrulin

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xiongrulin

EVERY TIME

词，曲，编曲，制作，演唱，录音：小熊

VERSE 1
Every time I close my eyes
I got your face on my mind
Every time I sing a song
I thought I see you pass outside
Every time I read a book
It’s a story of you and I
Every time I think to myself
Oh God, love is so blind

CHORUS:
I hate you, I want you, I need you, I love you
That’s (babe) how I feel
On Sunday, on Monday, on Tuesday, on Wednesday
Thursday, Friday and In Saturday

VERSE 2
Every time when people dance
I step aside and hug myself
Every time I take a look around
I’m in a river so wide
Every time I lost in darkness
You’re the moon the stars in the sky
Every time it starts to rain
That’s the teardrops from my eyes

REPEAT CHORUS.

BRIDGE:
Hold me, touch me
Don’t you leave me in the rain?
I feel so bad, I feel so sad
When love and hate collide
I’ve driven a thousand miles, just to get away from you
‘Cause this time, you’re really driving me crazy
I will ease the troubles from you, take away all your pain
Baby, remember
I’ll be by your side


我的其它歌曲请点击: http://t2.xianlaiju.com/viewthread.php?tid=123573&xuid=77064

[ Last edited by xiongrulin on 2005-6-5 at 22:55 ]

V音

随着一声『恭喜发财』，从天上掉下一滴甘露正好落在你的嘴唇上！
你在恍惚中看见了2两黄金。
哇```多面手,包揽了所有制作```佩服佩服!!!交你这个朋友啦
老兄的英文很好的吧```
中文歌词啊,我试试```粤语的可以吗````

xiongrulin

写得不好，自己现在都不好意思听了，不过一直都想给这首歌写个中文歌词，但一直没感觉，哪位能帮个忙啊？谢了！我的email: xiongrulin@hotmail.com，若有歌词可以发给我，或者直接留帖也行，交个朋友嘛！

xiongrulin

Originally posted by V音 at 2005-5-9 01:12:
随着一声『恭喜发财』，从天上掉下一滴甘露正好落在你的嘴唇上！
你在恍惚中看见了2两黄金。
哇```多面手,包揽了所有制作```佩服佩服!!!交你这个朋友啦
老兄的英文很好的吧```
中文歌词啊, ...

谢谢你！可是粤语我不会唱啊，汗。。。

喝二锅头的猴子

随着一声『观音娘娘到』，从天上掉下一滴甘露正好落在你的嘴唇上！
你在恍惚中看见了4两黄金。
楼主的？？？？？？？
嗓音很像亚当斯啊！！！！！
强！！！
词也是自己写的？？
高人！！！！！！！！

xiongrulin

楼上的,多谢了,我会更努力的!!!

zenyong888

太好了,我都晕了,佩服..

zenyong888

我想填词,怕佩不上你这么好的曲子.

xiongrulin

楼上的朋友,太抬举在下了,大家交流一下嘛,不用太自谦,你一定行的,写好发到我邮箱,谢谢你!