清唱的一小段RAP。给我的no-no

EminemWang

表白被拒绝之后写的
只写了几句而已
然后写不下去了
很粗糙，曲风也是东拼西凑，希望能理解了

yo baby zis iz simple u gon’ see
I’ll B brave n happy enough cuz my heart close 2 me
but wutz next if u my baby u gonna leave
how my world will turn like, iz still in da deap mystery
I don’ know where my feel about u comes from
but u know da real EminemWang iz not that strong
baby mayB it was me that was wrong
but why da resoult must B like these that I found
n every night in da bed I think about ur pretty smile
n rememba wut u talk 2 me then my tears drop
how I wash we could get back 2 a week bi4
at that time we were friendz n u was my dear no-no
but in da god damn game I was fair n be K.O.
in da fact da real person iz me that iza fool
at zis time I’ll still tell u zis
I love u girl, n u’re da one that I’ll always miss
I love u, yeah.

纤手莲心

如果配上点节奏音乐，听起来会流畅些

fairyboy

应该配上音乐啊~~
说得很有味道。。。
加油加油。。。

逆天鹰

又是一首英文的歌曲，我喜欢！~！~

EminemWang

谢谢各位的支持了
我也想加上伴奏
不过，现在写得节奏不是很一致
要加伴奏会很不适合
所以以后能有机会想把这个改成完整的一首RAP
会继续努力的

EminemWang

大家多少给一点意见吧
怎么说也是想提高的

xiaocai303

你唱得还真好听，应该是发自内心唱出来的，有情感。

vicky527

我觉得不是很像RAP，有点在念……